Nice. My only comments are: The lettering maybe needs to be a bit thicker/bolder to stand out and be more legible. Maybe a slightly darker blue for the rivers, and a thinner line. Or a sharper line, they look a little blurred to me. For me the crimson/red is a bit too bright... but otherwise quite like it. Nice and colourful.
Nice. My only comments are: The lettering maybe needs to be a bit thicker/bolder to stand out and be more legible. Maybe a slightly darker blue for the rivers, and a thinner line. Or a sharper line, they look a little blurred to me. For me the crimson/red is a bit too bright... but otherwise quite like it. Nice and colourful.
ReplyDeleteAlistair Langsford Yup, you are right on the lettering, for a second there I though I was looking at Aurabesh
ReplyDeleteIts quite good. The color pallet makes me think Its an altitude map, outside the Mountains of the Moon I imagined the place way more flat.
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